13. Critique on Argumentive essay.

    Honestly, I am very dissatisfied when I am looking at my draft #1. It is a terrible coincidence that both the first and the second drafts of our main essay we should write at night after deadlines of our calculus homework. Despite David was telling us many times that we should think about our essays and write it before the last day before class, we are all just humans and we can procrastinate almost everything. ( If your essay was complete yesterday, I think you are very strange.
    So, I written my essay in 4 hours of night, and, consequently, it wasn't very good. I started understanding it when I was writing and printing it, but the complete understanding came to my mind when I started reading classmates' essays. Of course, they were not perfect, but they were much better then my one. I wan't to change it's structure and make the paragraphs more logical. I have rather nice argiments and I will try to make make citations as right as possible because it is the main part of our assignment and it tas a big value in mark for this assignment. I am very grateful to my classmates' who pointed me at my mistakes.
    So, now I can say that my essay is rather bad. Of cource, it is not very good to start writing my essay now, but "better late than never". I think good written essay worth sleepless night.